1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
2.0 out of 5 stars
Not a great romance, not a great thriller..., Jun 30 2004
And Then You Die is marketed as a novel of suspense, involving romance and action. On both these counts I feel the book fails to deliver. The characters, whilst interesting, are never fleshed out enough to make them truly likeable. The plot has several twists but it seemed almost mechanical to me.
The lead characters Bess and Kaldak are in many places scarcely likeable. Bess is grieving after the death of her sister but she is frequently illogical and abrasive. She basically decided that she didn't like how the CIA were protecting her and that she 'knew best'. Doubtlessly we were supposed to think that she was feisty and determined, but she came across as difficult and tiresome. The result of her interferance was that she constantly put Kaldak and other agents in danger for her own motives. Bess became insufferably bossy, telling everyone else how to do their jobs although she had no military / law enforcement background. Her constant protestations of 'I'm not hungry' and 'I don't want to eat/sleep etc' had me wanting to toss the book aside to grab the biscuit tin.
Kaldak was violent towards Bess at their first couple of meetings, hitting her in the face and knocking her unconscious on several occasions, which I found disturbing. Throughout the whole novel there was barely a proper physical description of Kaldak beyond the word 'intimidating'. Kaldak, in fact, describes himself as ugly - I would have preferred it if he was described in more detail so I could have seen him clearly in my mind.
A plus point was the dialogue which was fast and furious and very realistic, but the lack of description around the dialogue meant that we never find out much depth or background to the story and characters - it all seemed very one-dimensional, like a Hollywood blockbuster that has a time limit of an hour and a half.
Overall I don't think that And Then You Die is a great action novel, and the romance certainly falls short of what I was looking for. At one point Kaldak tells Bess that "If I'd needed to do it, I would have killed you, your sister, and your guide." To me, these were not the words of the protective, alpha male type that I like to read about, they had crossed the borderline into something less noble and vaguely alarming. Kaldak had certainly been damaged by his tragic past, more damaged than I felt comfortable with. Unfortunately the best part in the whole book was probably the last couple of pages, which seemed heartfelt and were a nice conclusion to it all.
JoAnne
Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
Was this review helpful to you? Yes
No
3.0 out of 5 stars
Not a bad book, April 12 2004
A photographer and her sister go to a city for a photo shoot and everyone there is dead. Next you find out what caused it. To me the book seemed like nothing but one chase scene after another. And of course there has to be the inevitiable romance in there. Not a bad book, but not great and the characters were certainly very shallow and undeveloped.
Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
Was this review helpful to you? Yes
No
1.0 out of 5 stars
Painful to finish, Mar 31 2004
Unfortunately, I was brought up to finish the books I started and in this case, it is very painful. In her first draft for the book, Ms Johansen probably had a 13 year old girl in puberty cast as the herione, who always just says "no", "I do not want to eat", "I do not want to sleep", etc. The herione in this book is so stupid but she always knows better, telling the entire CIA what to do next, although she has no idea what is going on, yes, very probable plot indeed. Well, I have about 100 pages to go, wish me luck!
Help other customers find the most helpful reviews
Was this review helpful to you? Yes
No