In the direction of little towns, the opening poem of Chris Bankss debut collection Bonfires, gave me shivers. I admit to being nostalgic about the Eastern Ontario landscape he recreates in the book, but this bias, I think, also insulates me from any false praise. I am particularly sensitive to any attempt to call up Purdys country north of Belleville, and not for poetic reasons (Purdy I can take or leave), but because I spent my childhood and adolescent summers there. Banks piles image upon image, creating a landscape where everything disassembles itself/into some new clarity. Cows become crows become grain silos which turn into first lovers, and every stretch of the gravel road is equal parts joy and sorrow, as if going anywhere/is to leave something behind. Bankss book has its faults, but for a poet on the rise, Banks shows a remarkable maturity.
The first section of Bonfires, The Country of our Exile is about a lost urbanite. Arguments is a break-up poem, but in Bankss description of an argument between a couple, where the walls [resonate]/with sounds of our shared lungs/moving a cavern of air, we get the sense that at stake in the one final argument is the rejection of country life for the city. Indeed, in the next poem, Stumbling Home, we find the speaker lost as if dumped, feeling drunk and rudderless, on city streets. There are echoes of his rural youth in Thirty-One where in [his] backyard, birds/sing in my cherry tree like a choir of exiles.
Banks gets caught up in his own ennui in Form Letters, a kind of what did I do today poem. There is an unexpected turn as the speaker hands the mailman a poem, instead of a letter, but the tone of this poem is flat, and the metaphors, though interesting, are disconnected: Leaves hang sigil-like/from iron branches is robbed of any relative meaning next to Model homes/stand incommunicado across the street. Perhaps this is what Banks intends: the suburbs rob the poet of his will to live; but the last lines of this poem are too cliché to make us believe that the poet is being ironic. If he is going for irony, he has overdone it: Miracles do happen, make your dreams/come true, free yourself today, celebrate summer/claim your prize, be happy [italics, inexplicably, in the original].
Another poem in which Banks seems to lose the energy generated from the tension between urban and rural is What we encounter. While interesting from a zoological point of view, and linguistically sound, this benign encounter between frog and dog has nothing at stake and has no additional meaning. Banks is at his best when he complicates the mood with a mix of mundaneness and nostalgia. Domestic Wages does just that, while still including the speakers dog, and instead of a frog, snails. The poet succeeds here by jumping from dead snails in a saucer of beer, dregs [his] dog didnt want, to notions of infinity, then back to traffic jams and cubical work, and finally, into the arms of new loves. It is this type of everyday contemplation, contrasting a natural-rural if you will-aesthetic with the more urban images of the drive to work, the queue at the coffee shop that recalls the country idyll evoked in the preceding poems.
In Signs of leaving simplicity is called for. Banks brings his two competing worlds together, as Canada geese/are flying south and brown trout/are running up river/like bayonets/stabbing against/the stream, while young couples/wake up all over town/no longer in love. The end of the poem prefigures the second section of the book:
Subtle signatures
awakening in us
that animal need to
leave it all behind-
and begin again.
And so the poet heads off to China, the North Korean Demilitarised Zone and, in the middle of Book of Changes, Prague. The section of the book is typical in terms of travel poetry, but what Banks does with sweet, subtle efficacy is lead the reader through his own scattered thoughts, so that while were exposed to his disorientation, we know exactly where we are. The last four lines in Long Road to China: read
knowing I choose with purpose
to drive off into a mystery
beyond restraint or nagging doubt,
wanting only to arrive.
The next poem, Our Lady of the Cornfields has an epigraph from Al Purdy, and takes place on the Trans-Canada highway between Cornwall and Quebec City. Voila: the poet has arrived home. Well, almost. There is a desperation in the penultimate, and the final poem of the section, reserved for the last leg of a long journey, when the familiar only serves to remind the traveller that he or she is not quite home. In When you have already come so far, we have the moon racing the 401, tiny rivulets of silence/underpinning every moment, pulling you in and out/of yourself, and each dialled FM station/luring you back/to a high school, or a university, or a childhood/filled with Neil Diamond songs/at a cottage no longer your own.
The third section, ironically titled Was this what you came for? continues Bankss subtle journey. He moves back and forth between home now and home then, especially in the series My father wanted to be a cowboy. In this series, he works imagery and character nostalgically in an honest but guarded sketch of his father without being sentimental. He doesnt hit us over the head with the obvious question: have I become my father? but the idea is there, hinted at in the roving, nomadic life of a cowboy that reminds us, quietly, of the journey from which the poet-speaker has just returned.
It is only in the last section, appropriately titled Whats left to wonder about, that one of the common faults of a first book appears. He cobbles together what seem to be random thoughts, still on the theme of memory and self-discovery, but left out of the arching narrative of the rest of the book. Nonetheless, Age is a recurring dream is a suitable ending for this haunting collection of poems:
The boy died: he left at dusk
with the last butterflies of summer.
A young man now sleeps in the gilded cage
of his bones. In his dream,
the boy returns-an old man
carrying his poverty and his shoes.
And moving very slowly, like one
who has lived a long time,
he pulls his shadow across the fields,
the moons last remains.
A first book often feels rushed. The poet wants to get his or her work out there, and so sacrifices sober reflection for momentum and energy. This doesnt appear to be the case with Chris Banks.
John Lofranco (Books in Canada)
In these poems, Chris Banks has taken the world he knows and thrown it on the pyre, offered up in intimate sacrifice. Up close, the language sparks and pops, burning the fuel of the poet's experience. From a comfortable distance, these poems cast a warming glow upon the reader. In the sense of this collection's title, they are bonfires signalling the direction in which vigorous thoughts are moving, but they also become the flashpoints around which memorable stories are told.
--Paul VermeerschBonfires manages to combine humour and breathlessness in a way that Canadian poetry seldom does. Chris Banks knows that fire takes that precious air and eats it. These are poems of unpaid bills, public transit, dust, dog piss, histamine, history, litter, longing. Banks combines beauty with a kind of trivial domestic ugliness, emerging reverent, setting us "adrift under the only sky / we will ever know."
--Emily Schultz, Broken PencilBonfires is a delightful debut with poems so accomplished they take over every page. Rarely has a first book been this impressive. Time and again, these poems made me see the world anew and many startled me with their right and wonderful phrases and images. Banks covers a wide array of subject matter and with a remarkable command, so whether he is writing about family, about the north, about traveling abroad, or the house next door he makes us care and see that everything matters, that nothing is superfluous. These poems are so good you won't put the book down once you start."
--Robert HillesBonfires tells the story of every Canadian in the twentieth century through fragmented narratives and beautiful imagery.
--Imprint OnlineBonfires is Chris Banks' impressive debut. His writing is self-assured and, as a whole, the book seems like poetry that has developed over time. I sense that Banks did not rush into print, and these poems are tightly edited and carefully crafted ... He manages to make even small observations seem important.
--Jay Ruzesky, Malahat ReviewBanks piles image upon image, creating a landscape where "everything disassembles itself/into some new clarity" ... [In the book's travel poems] what Banks does with sweet, subtle efficacy is lead the reader through his own scattered thoughts, so that while we're exposed to his disorientation, we know exactly where we are.
--John Lofranco, Books in CanadaChris Banks offers a striking debut with his first collection,
Bonfires. His poems resonate with a "pure" intention to capture a moment, and to find the elusive link between experience and its attendant cluster of emotions.
Against the backdrop of Southern Ontario are set Banks' concise explorations of meaning, navigations of memory, and rallies against loneliness. Each near-miss at capturing the truth of pain's presence, at getting down "what it is trying to say / and how it is probably right" resonates with the conflicting bravery and loss of confrontation. Over the course of the collection the voice reconstitutes itself, and consequently its reader, as its own companion. The poems are bare with self-honesty, and smoulder with stock-taking.
This is a lyric voice honed from real speech and developed by a keen ear for cadence. It has the quiet assuredness of the best lyric poets and yet is for the most part free of the practiced rhythm that inhabits and anesthetizes so much contemporary work: rather than putting voice in the service of intellectualized argument, here emotion sings, and uses craft to modulate the pace and decibel level."
--Sonnet L'Abbé, Canadian Literature