4 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
Good premise, bad execution, Aug 3 2009
By Sean Hoade - Published on Amazon.com
This review is from: Demon Chick (Hardcover)
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This book has an interesting premise that wasn't executed very well. Jessica's backstory depicts her as such a nonentity that I'm not even sure why it's given. We are told that she has basically spent the past 16 years moving from school to school; she's been cared for by nannies and assistants; she has no friends, no family except the mother who completely ignores her, and spends all her time alone, and yet somehow she's basically a regular, if slightly nerdy, girl, who is suddenly dealing fairly well with being sold to the devil. Learning who Jessica is (or trying to), I just felt like the author was as uninterested in her as Jessica's mother is. All the characters felt flat to me. Jordan is the most interesting, but when his passion for doing good leads him into morally ambiguous territory, the issue is quickly dropped, as the story rushes to an end. I wasn't looking for anything heavy or deeply meaningful from this book, but then why present such a situation where those kinds of questions are raised? Occasionally the dialogue included a clanker like a teen saying: "I'm frightened." When have you ever heard a real teen use that kind of language? And in several spots the writer uses Jessica's lack of experience as a writer (the framing is that Jessica is writing her story) to sneak in a cliche or two, saying, I know this is a cliche, but... It felt like a cheat. Finally, when the story is nearing the end, and Jessica feels compelled to tell all to Jordan, he believes her incredible story almost immediately, and for no good reason that I can see. "Yeah, I've been sold to the devil by my mother." "Oh, really? Okay." The story is a quick read. Jessica and Brad's relationship is often sweet (though soured somewhat by her tryst with Jordan). The author's vision of Hell as the land of mediocrity is amusing, and her poke at the French was funny (seeing as how she lives in Paris). It just felt like this could have been so much more.
4 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
4.0 out of 5 stars
Very readable, July 22 2009
By Shala Kerrigan - Published on Amazon.com
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Jessica is a young lady with liberal leanings, and her mother is a right wing political figure who is poised to become the first female president of the United States. They aren't close, they barely know each other.
Much to Jessica's surprise, she finds out on her 16th birthday that her mother's rise to power was facilitated by a deal with the devil. Her mother traded her first born daughter for power.
Good thing though, she winds up with a very nice demon named Brad in one of Hell's better neighborhoods. While she's there, she finds out her mother's actual plans for the world after she comes to power.
Those plans are the satire in the book. It is just believable a political candidate for president could have plans like this to take over the world and change what the US is and be able to pull it off.
Brad helps her get back to earth to stop her mother, now she just has to figure out how.
The ending of the book was a bit rushed, but that was okay because it had some unexpected twists in it that I enjoyed.
Recommend for mature 14 yo or older. There is some adult language and adult subject manner, but it's nicely handled. I plan to discuss it with my daughter after she reads it.
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
2.0 out of 5 stars
mediocre, Aug 24 2009
By J. Evans - Published on Amazon.com
This review is from: Demon Chick (Hardcover)
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I'm afraid this book is not up to par with the others I've read. I feel the characters are not very strong and for the most part the plot was predictable. The overall outcome of the antogonist was surprising but it took 180 pages to get to that, and then it was the only surprise in the book. I think the author rushed the story and it could have been way better considering the interesting concept.
Plot Summary:
Evil Mother sells daighters soul to the devil so become major political icon. Daughter happens to get a nice demon master, who lets her return to earth to stop said evil mother. If i say any more the story would be ruined. sorry.