3.0 out of 5 stars
Confusing, April 9 2004
This review is from: Done for a Dime (Hardcover)
The author has presented what, on the surface, seems like a
murder mystery as an older musician is shot in the back and
killed, for no apparent good reason, and the local cops start
their tedious process of questioning everyone.
But he goes much beyond that, and the story becomes quite complex, as to both the characters, as well as their motivations. So, in those senses, this can be a good read, and
many people will enjoy the complex story and the serious development of many characters.
However, the author has a strange way of trying to engage our interest, because he engages in so much "in" lingo, it's difficult to follow who all these people are and what they are
doing. He uses "inside" language when presenting the police
detectives and their work, the gangbangers and other criminals
who may be involved, the nearby dopers, and the corrupt politicians, so most of us are floundering a bit as we try to
decipher his language and its meaning.
This approach just doesn't quite seem designed to bring readers
into his fictional world, but, on the other hand, it does seem
to be used as a barrier to prevent our strong interest and engagement. A very odd use of language for a writer.
Instead of using the English language to inform and captivate
most readers, he seems more interesting in keeping our interest
at a distance.
This just isn't for everyone, because it is difficult to follow
in many places.
In addition, the overall tone of this book is so negative, and
so bleak, it becomes depressing, and while the author does a nice job of perfecting that bleak, down atmosphere, throughout
the entire story, that tone and atmosphere won't suit everyone.
There is considerable depth of character here, and many diverse
characters are presented, so many readers will be happy to follow their development.
But, as said, much of this is difficult to follow in detail,
with the language used to hide or cover activities and feelings,
and the bleakness and hopelessness of all the characters sets
such a negative tone, the book definitely isn't for everyone.
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1.0 out of 5 stars
"Put down your gun, Mister," I'm P.C. to the max., Dec 7 2003
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Praised by such bastions of fair-mindedness as the N.Y. Times, I read this book knowing what to expect and was not disappointed. I would like to use more colorful language, but will settle for this very apt cliche: "This book wears its emotions and liberal bonafides on its sleeves." The writing is passable, but the story and, more importantly, the philosophy underlying it, is didactic mush. Another James Lee Burke clone who never met a liberal cause he didn't like. Virtually unreadable.
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5.0 out of 5 stars
Powerful, passionate, and compelling, Dec 6 2003
By A Customer
This review is from: Done for a Dime (Hardcover)
David Corbett's story of the murder of a jazz musician is an utterly compelling read from start to finish. The deadly consequences of the initial killing, the aching hearts of the survivors, the alternating brutality and compassion of the all-too-human policemen - all are rendered in powerful, vivid prose that makes no compromises. Readers looking for crime fiction on a par with Dennis Lehane's MYSTIC RIVER need look no further than this terrific novel.
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