Sequel to Define Destiny
Haunting Shadows (Destiny)
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Format:Paperback
This writer attempted to write about the struggles of Catherine and Jace and their life together in a sequel that is suppose to be about power, control and the ever presence of love. However, this book lacks creativity and expression along those lines, with little resourcefulness that was readily available to her with her established characters.
After the writer failed with the utilizaton of her characterizations, she tried another compromise that exposed the true goals of the vulnerable, mind-boggling, implausible storyline with shooting, employees throwing themselves out of windows, previous drug uses by Catherine, Jace's struggles with her hatred and pathetic attempts at being a loving partner, the publishing empire of Catherine's with the personnel, and how she came to run the publishing business originally. The story is simply not credible or convincing.
The writer needed to condense the topic sentences as much as possible without losing the author's meaning, but this wasn't accomplished. She needed to evaluate each paragraph to determine whether it is a primary, secondary, or tertiary paragraph had fulfilled her characterizations or added to the plot. Again, she didn't. I often felt, the writer eliminate topics sentences from tertiary toward primary without realizing she was doing such, and that she was totally unaware the most important ones left did not fit within the assigned scheme of the story. This was by far, the most lackluster,scantily inscribed book I have read in many, many years.
There are surprisingly good alternatives in Lesbian fiction already developed to fill the appetite of any reader without being bored to death by grammatically incorrect, inadequately edited attempts at lesbian literature. My recommendation on this one is to save your money.
By Sydney Parks
Format:Paperback
I don't usually write negative reviews - in fact I think this is my second. However - I was moved to write this because I was so disappointed by this novel.
For me, the characters are the heart and soul of the novel - and this sequel novel featured Catherine and Jace as the main characters. I never felt that I got to know either. Both were two dimensional - at best. Supporting characters were a little more fleshed out, but not enough. The storyline was sporadic, erratic and far-fetched. and not interesting at all. Dialogue was so primitive and certainly nothing that people in these professional fields would be saying even in their sleep. There just wasn't anything about this book that kept my interest. My last rant is the cover was so misleading. Why would you think that bursting light would depict a title like Haunting Shadows?
I'm upset that I spent a lot of money (Australian) on this... when there are so many other great books out there that I could have bought! If you're reading this saying "what books?" - try reading some of the well known published novels by authentic Lesbian authors such as Kathrine Forrest, Missy Good, or BL Miller, that give you a thought out tale, some really well developed characters with appropriate and believable dialogue. My advise is Save Your Money. End rant.
For me, the characters are the heart and soul of the novel - and this sequel novel featured Catherine and Jace as the main characters. I never felt that I got to know either. Both were two dimensional - at best. Supporting characters were a little more fleshed out, but not enough. The storyline was sporadic, erratic and far-fetched. and not interesting at all. Dialogue was so primitive and certainly nothing that people in these professional fields would be saying even in their sleep. There just wasn't anything about this book that kept my interest. My last rant is the cover was so misleading. Why would you think that bursting light would depict a title like Haunting Shadows?
I'm upset that I spent a lot of money (Australian) on this... when there are so many other great books out there that I could have bought! If you're reading this saying "what books?" - try reading some of the well known published novels by authentic Lesbian authors such as Kathrine Forrest, Missy Good, or BL Miller, that give you a thought out tale, some really well developed characters with appropriate and believable dialogue. My advise is Save Your Money. End rant.
By Teresa
Format:Paperback
Haunting Shadows the sequel to Define Destiny is a must read.
The characters are very well rounded and developed giving the reader a chance to identify with each one. The imagery is first class allowing the reader to see the story unfold much like a movie. Treat yourself to a wonderful reading experience and read this remarkable story
The characters are very well rounded and developed giving the reader a chance to identify with each one. The imagery is first class allowing the reader to see the story unfold much like a movie. Treat yourself to a wonderful reading experience and read this remarkable story
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1.0 out of 5 stars
Gonzo style reads contrived rather than fresh.
Not only must the lead character deal with the New York shootings at Xionthis's Publishing which is located in Catherine's Building, but Catherine must return to her drug filled... Read more
Published on Dec 3 2003
4.0 out of 5 stars
Another Great Read
J M Dragon has done it again in this sequel to Define Destiny. I enjoyed this second look into the trials, tribulations & trumphs of Jace & Catherine just as much as I did... Read more
Published on Nov 25 2003
1.0 out of 5 stars
Failed to capture the jealousy, naivete, or fear of story.
The characters are some sort of archetype named Catherine and Jace. Catherine is older than Jace, who is pregnant and gives birth to a baby girl that supposedly looks like the... Read more
Published on Oct 23 2003 by "filmcatqueen"
1.0 out of 5 stars
A Little Trite for me, not well written either.
I've never read anything by this writer before, but found the overall theme of the book not very well thought out. Read more
Published on Oct 23 2003
5.0 out of 5 stars
Great Book!
I want more. With such talent as J.M. Dragon obviously has, she must keep writing. We need more from this writer. Soon!
Published on Sep 27 2003
5.0 out of 5 stars
Great author!
Lovely book by a talented author!!! Keep up the good work and keep writing!
Published on Sep 27 2003
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