I don't expect much from porn stories, and I'm not usually disappointed.
Most of what's available ranges from pretty bad to wholesale crap.
So it's a real shocker to run across a story with an actual STORY, character development, complex relationships, and educated English grammar and spelling!
This story is longer than most available in this genre from Amazon (or pretty much anywhere, I guess), but it is a good read throughout. Sexy and somehow realistic. What does a couple ACTUALLY say to one another when they are experimenting at the edges of propriety and convention? Not the hackneyed stereotypical things that most writers throw in to keep the sex scenes from banging together (so to speak!), but real talking and caring dialog.
What an idea!
Porn? Yes, I suppose, but much more solid prose and more mainstream than a lot of what's available.
And yet, really HOT.