6 of 6 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Loved this book, Sep 21 2001
By Margaret "10 Year Amazon Browser" - Published on Amazon.com
This review is from: The Marriage Wager (Mass Market Paperback)
For all the reasons that we read books like these, I loved this book.
There was an honorable, admirable heroine and an imperfect yet extremely attractive hero. The details provided, as well as the secondary characters, provided motivation(s) for both the hero and heroine. These were much more than three-dimentional and created an engrossing story.
This is the first book I read by this author, and it has made me keep an eye open for any books published by this author since then.
3.0 out of 5 stars
It's OK but I couldn't finish it., Dec 28 2009
By Deborah Rimmer "eclectic choices" - Published on Amazon.com
This review is from: The Marriage Wager (Mass Market Paperback)
I bought this book because I have liked some other stories Jane Ashford wrote. She does write well, wonderful similes, but all the elegant prose in the world will not make an unbelievable story better.
1 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
5.0 out of 5 stars
Well written and very engaging, Jan 29 2009
By Sarah1989 - Published on Amazon.com
This review is from: The Marriage Wager (Mass Market Paperback)
I don't know what the 3 star reviewer was talking about that it's a good book for being 10 years old and that much has changed in romance writing. The things that have changed are things that, in my opinion, should not have changed. Things like making sure all the parts of the story tie together and that the conflicts the characters have, both internally and with others, drive their actions.
Newer romances often seem to rely on explicit sex, and the characters having strange appendages or incredible abilities to cover over the lack of craft in the fiction. Oh, and the lack of correct punctuation. I have pretty much stopped reading new romance novels even though I enjoyed the sex scenes. The run on sentences and the grammatical errors make me grit my teeth. The way some authors throw in big or little used words, but do not use the words correctly. Oh, and the way characters' actions make no sense, but are excused because the character is an alien, or a vampire, or a spy.
Jane Ashford is a good writer. I guess that's why the 3 star reviewer enjoyed it even though it WAS 10 years old.