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Moaning About Aging Is Not Poetry -- Woe Is Me, May 30 2011
By G. Charles Steiner - Published on Amazon.com
This review is from: Outtakes (Paperback)
There's a lot of bellyaching about getting old, death coming nearer, life having limits, etcetera, etcetera in this dimly trenchant book of poetry. The poet claims to be 70, but my 82-year-old widowed mother wouldn't tolerate listening to the metaphoric plaints this poet tries to plant in the reader's heart and mind, even though both are in need of a partner. In this book of poems the poet announces this is the year for him to keep death company and to comb its hair. No doubt it is very long and very gray hair. He keeps his word to this commitment even with his next book of poems, "Bye-and Bye: Selected Late Poems," a collection I couldn't finish reading because he really has almost nothing really to say except to the desire to prattle poetically now that he's an old geezer and not liking it one bit.
The book has a quality of the B. J. Thomas tune, "I'm So Lonely I Could Cry," which is good if it targets a handful of poems, but a bit ridiculous -- as Art -- when it permeates the whole book. It has a quality of Peggy Lee's "Is That All There Is?" as well.
A few poems waft religious or superstitious with tossed-off references to an afterlife and the new moon, all while the poet watches Nature's changes in the shadows, in the night.
No poem in this collection is longer than 9 lines long. Opposite each poem is an illustration or photograph, using the grays and whites and blacks of a photographic negative. I believe the intention is to have the image opposite the poem supplement the poem, support the poem, reveal the poem, but all of the images are blurred and, frankly, bad. The poems themselves are printed in typewriter print and even contain proofreading edits and revisions to give each a "sincere" and "authentic" quality. (This is so sad! So unoriginal!)
It's all very adolescent and 1960s, surprising for a man who, well, seems to have a reputation not quite in sync with his latest productions. Wright's poems here give strength to Zarathustra's criticism about the true nature of the poet. That is, "Mooo! Moooo!" Here it's just moan, moan.