17 of 19 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars
A woman writes an epic poem ..., Jan 3 2008
By 'amerye' - Published on Amazon.com
This review is from: Penelopeia (Hardcover)
A woman writes an epic poem ... and nobody notices.
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9 of 10 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars
Warp and Weft, Feb 1 2008
By Customer Formerly Known as Giordano Bruno - Published on Amazon.com
This review is from: Penelopeia (Hardcover)
By now everybody knows that Homer was not a single person but rather a husband-and-wife writing team. Mr. Homer wrote the Iliad, with its incomparable action scenes, its earnest nobility, its chiseled-chin simplicity and unity. On the other hand, the layered ambiguity of the Odyssey, with its attention to psychological turmoil and its expressive secretiveness, could only have been the work of Mrs. Homer. Thus the large differences of syntax and vocabulary are explained.
My sources suggest that Mrs. Homer had something of a reincarnated love affair with a scholar named Richmond Lattimore, a union which gave birth to Jane Rawlings, who inherited her mother's secrets and her father's literary style. The Penelopeia is therefore the grandchild so ardently desired by all. Rawlings certainly has both the manner and the flair for metaphorical language of Lattimore's translations of the Greek classics. Occasionally, one might wish that Rawlings had seen fit to write in her "mother's" tongue, since English lacks the metric sonority of Attic Greek. Without those thunderous cadences, The Penelopeia remains prose - very interesting prose, unlike any other except Lattimore's - but immune to the influences of modern English poetry. In short, this is a novel, with the novel structure of pseudo-epic free verse. As a novel, I enjoyed it a lot, and I won't give away any of its novelty. My only carping criticism would be that Telemachos in The Penelopeia doesn't seem to represent the same character as Telemachos in the Odyssey. Author's choice, of course, but I've always considered Telemachos the pivotal and by far the most appealing character in the old epic, as well as the most human. He's not such a subtle portrayal in the new epic.
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars
Interesting epilogue to The Odyssey, Dec 1 2008
By Steven A. Peterson - Published on Amazon.com
This review is from: Penelopeia (Hardcover)
At the heart of this book is an almost breathtaking act of authorial hubris--to create a follow up epic poem to "The Odyssey," featuring Odysseus' wife, Penelope. Despite that, this works pretty well on its own merits and, thus, is worth taking a look at.
It is not, of course, at the same level as Homer's works. The book explores an odyssey of Penelope and her two daughters; there are 5-6 adventures (depending on how one counts them) that they take part in. Daughters? What's that all about? No word of these twins in Homer. But that is a starting point for this work, as Odysseus discovers that he has two daughters--and Telemachos that he has two sisters.
The premise is slender, but works. Penelope had promised to visit an oracle. Also, her son is severely wounded by a not your normal boar, and she also seeks an herbal remedy to try to save his life. So, the journey reveals that much is at stake.
Among highlights. . . . The visit to the Prophetess at Pytho. The trip to Menelaus' kingdom to see Helen (yes, of Troy), to seek her aid in finding the cure for Telemachos' sickness. It is fascinating to come across one scenario of what happened to Helen after she was returned to her husband at the close of the Trojan War. Other adventures? An encounter with a group of Amazons. And so on.
There are questions one can raise about this work. Telemachos and Odysseus appear to be in very bad humor at the start of this work, as Penelope explains some of the events during her husband's absence. Their reaction does not seem to work well from my reading. In her adventures, there are a couple times where Penelope seems curiously irresolute and changes her mind for, to be honest, not much reason.
Still, this is an interesting take on the aftereffects of Odysseus' struggles to return home to Ithaka. The characters are drawn pretty well; the verse is quite serviceable. The 238 pages of text moved along crisply as I read. There is also a nice glossary of names and places at the end (with a pronunciation guide). Quite helpful. If you can conceive of an extension of the Odyssey by Odysseus' wife, you will, I think, find this an appealing work.