1.0 out of 5 stars
Bad II, Aug 4 2006
It's bad, folks. It's just plain bad. The story idea was a good one, though certainly not new or original, but the writing killed it... no pun intended. From an editor, I expected a LOT more, but Nasisse's writing was amateurish and full of glaring inconsistencies in descriptions. Every attempt at suspense was transparent and overdone the point of eye-rolling mellowdrama. Every character was not just one dimensional, they were caricatures. In an attempt to shock us, Nasisse resorts to graphic descriptions of gore that are so extreme they are almost instantly boring and completely unbelievable. It's just not worth saying anything more. It's a real stinker and I've got to wonder about the ages of the reviewers who thought it was great... 14? 15?
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1.0 out of 5 stars
Bad, Jun 24 2004
I won't go into too much depth here, as I'm sure it would only lead to spoilers. Not that it would matter much. You already know everything there is to know about this book as you've read it before. You know what the characters are going to do and what they'll say. You'll know who will die within the first 50 pages.
Expect to groan a great deal. Expect to groan more often than you flip pages as the story goes on. Expect to know the outcome of the action very quickly. Expect to know the full backstory before you read it. Don't expect outstanding writing skills, as writing takes an absolute backseat to simple action narrative.
Least of all, don't expect any maturity over time in the characters, don't expect any intelligence in them, and don't expect to relate to more than their hobbies. As a matter of fact, you might not even be able to tell one from another based on personality, as they say the same things. The only real difference is the backstory.
Do yourself a favor, track down a copy of Michael Talbot's The Bog, from the 80s. The story is almost exactly the same, only the care given to the changes in the characters sets it far above this novel.
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4.0 out of 5 stars
An Ancient Evil Awakens..., Jun 19 2004
Jake Caruso is a contractor commissioned to restore the old Blake family mansion, Stonemoor, to its previous state of grandeur. However, when his team discovers a huge tombstone-like block guarding the entrance to an underground passage, all construction inevitably ceases for the time being. When a disgruntled employee decides to break into the underground chamber in hopes of finding treasure hidden within, he unwittingly unleashes terror upon the town of Harrington Falls, and meets his own demise. Shortly thereafter, several barbarous murders take place. An evil plagues the small mountain community, and no one is safe.
Sam Travers writes role-playing games and works nights at the local nursing home, where he has befriended a resident named Gabriel. During Sam's long graveyard shifts, Gabriel entertains him by telling him stories of times long since past. Stories of "the Age of Creation," before primitive hominids had evolved into humans, and when two ancient races known as the Elders and the Na' Karat, or Nightshades, ruled the Earth.
Katelynn Riley is a graduate student working to complete her thesis for her sociology degree and is thus delving deep into the town's past. A past that she discovers has more to it than meets the eye. Furthermore, Kate wears around her neck a red stone that was given to her by Jake. A stone that he found deep within the underground passage at Stonemoor. Ever since she has worn the stone she has experienced terrible nightmares in which she can see through the eyes of a ravenous beast, as though she is indeed the beast herself.
Is there more substance to what Gabriel has been telling Sam than mere amusing fictional tales? Is there more to Gabriel himself? How does Kate's stone provide some unseen link between herself and the unleashed creature? Will these three friends be able to combine their knowledge and willpower to defeat the awakened Nightshade, Moloch, before they lose their own lives and the lives of others? Will they even be able to overcome the doubts their more rational mind inflicts upon them?
This is an outstanding debut novel! Joseph Nasisse does a great job of combining a little bit of fantasy with all the cliched elements of horror that fans of the genre know and love, and he adds some twists and turns so that the reader doesn't get bored along the way. The characters are very well developed, and the plot is spellbinding and cohesive. I loved how all of the characters were flawed in some way, making them innately human and three-dimensional.
Though this book didn't keep me up at night, scared to turn out the lights, it did have some intense moments that were somewhat frightening. There is some gore, but that is kept to a minimum. My biggest complaint is that the story line surrounding the Blake family was underdeveloped. Furthermore, expect a few editing errors sprinkled throughout the novel. However, neither detracts from the plot.
This should be a must-read for horror fans! Joseph Nasisse is a welcomed new voice in the horror genre, and I definitely look forward to picking up whatever novels he produces in the future, as his talent and skills should only be fine-tuned from here.
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