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K. J. Taylor

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Dec 28 2010 The Fallen Moon (Book 1)
Being chosen as a griffin's companion has allowed Arren Cardockson to gain a place of status within the land of Cymria. But Arren can never escape the prejudice that comes with his Northerner slave origins. For chained within the Arena where rogue griffins battle to entertain the crowds, there lies another soul crying out to be freed-a kindred spirit that will allow Arren to fulfill his destiny and release the darkness in his heart.


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  • Mass Market Paperback: 384 pages
  • Publisher: Ace (Dec 28 2010)
  • Language: English
  • ISBN-10: 0441019781
  • ISBN-13: 978-0441019786
  • Product Dimensions: 16.8 x 10.7 x 3 cm
  • Shipping Weight: 181 g
  • Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #682,213 in Books (See Top 100 in Books)

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ONE
The Black Egg

It all began with the hatching of the dark griffin. A restless day. A grey day. Clouds the colour of lead lay low over the land like a blanket, and the wind that blew over the mountains had the tang of ice in it. Winter was over, but the memory of it lingered.

The valley, overlooked by a trio of craggy peaks, was green and wild, untouched by humans. This was the domain of something else.

From her perch high above the treetops, the great beast who owned the valley had an excellent view of her territory. She lifted her head, the wind ruffling her feathers, orange eyes scanning the area for any sign of movement. All was peaceful, and she sighed and resettled herself in the massive nest she had made for herself. It was supported by the tops of five large trees and woven from the branches she had broken away to make room for it. Normally a griffin was content to sleep on a bare bough or a ledge, but this one had a clutch of eggs to guard.

She would not leave her nest once during the three months it would take for them to hatch.

She sighed again and rustled her wings. It had been two and a half months since the laying, and she had not eaten for two of them. Her stores of fat were running out, and if the eggs did not hatch soon she would be forced to abandon them—or even eat them to save her own life. She lifted her wing and rolled slightly on her side to check on them. There were three eggs, each one about the size of a melon. Two of them had light brown shells, flecked with white. The third was black. Not just dark brown, but pure jet-black, without a speck of any other colour. She had never seen an egg like it before.

She nudged the black egg a little further into the soft curve of her underbelly and crooned deep in her throat, then listened intently. Nothing, and she rolled back onto her chest and refolded her wings. When the eggs were ready to hatch they would start calling back. Until then all she could do was keep them warm and safe.

At thirty years old and as tall at her shoulder as a man, the mother griffin was a well-grown adult. Her front half was covered in glossy grey feathers, and her wings were mottled with black and white. Her hindquarters had tawny brown fur, clawed, padded paws and a long tail whose tip bore a wide fan of rigid black feathers. Her forelegs were bony and covered in grey scales, and her forefeet had long, many-jointed toes tipped with sharp, curved talons. Perfect for grasping and holding. She rested these formidable weapons on the edge of her nest and murmured to her eggs. 'Hatch soon. Soon. Do not make me wait longer. Awaken soon and break the shell.' It was less real talk than a kind of mantra, and she repeated it several times, letting the sound of her own voice keep her company and stave off her boredom.

After that she slept, woke and slept again, stuck in a kind of half-dreaming twilight as the time dragged by. She wanted to go, wanted to be free and fly away over the valley, but her instincts forced her to stay. She continued to check on her eggs, day after day, waiting for the chicks to begin their piping.

But they didn't. The weeks dragged by and she slowly weakened. Her ribs started to jut through her skin, and her feathers lost their shine. She was starving to death. Yet still she did not leave. Every day she thought of finally giving up and leaving the eggs, but every day she decided to wait another night. Just one more night. Just one more.

And then, at last, nearly half a month late, the chicks began to awaken. She crooned to them, just as she had done so many times before, and finally heard a faint chirping in reply. She nudged the eggs with her beak and called again, and once more the piping voices of the chicks came from inside the shells that imprisoned them.

The mother griffin pushed them forward to rest between her forelegs, and prepared for the final stage of her vigil.

The black egg was the first to begin moving. Tapping came from inside it, and the chick ceased chirping as it began to struggle to hatch. Shortly afterward, the other two eggs began to rock gently from side to side. The chicks were bracing their legs against the inside and trying to push their way out. The hatching began.

It was a slow process. The eggs moved and were still, moved and then stilled again. The chicks had to stop and rest frequently, but they always resumed their struggle, and the tapping grew louder until the black egg started to crack. A hole appeared in the side, and the mother had a brief glimpse of a tiny beak before it withdrew.

At this point, she abruptly stood up. Her chicks would be out of the shell very soon, and they would need to eat almost at once. It was time to hunt again. She stood tall, resting her foreclaws on the edge of the nest, and stretched her wings. They were stiff and sore from disuse, but she flapped them vigorously, forcing the muscles to work. They limbered again after a little while, and without any further hesitation she gathered her hind legs under her and leapt into the air. Her wings struck downward, lifting her, and she flew up and away from the nest and into the sky.

She flew a little clumsily at first, but quickly found her balance and flew in a wide circle over the valley, steering with the feathered rudder on her tail. Wanting to see her territory in its entirety, she circled higher. The valley was thickly wooded and lush, full of vines and lichen and moss. There was a patch of marsh right in the middle, where the trees thinned out, fed by a stream that flowed in from between two of the mountains. There were more mountains and valleys beyond in three directions, but to the north, behind the smallest of the three peaks, the land changed. The trees went only so far beyond it, and after that massive plains stretched toward the horizon. It was strange country, dotted with rocky outcrops here and there but almost completely bare of trees. She had heard that there had been trees there once, but they had all gone now. Taken down by humans. Humans hated trees. They were ground dwellers and preferred flat, clear land for their homes. It was not land for griffins. There was nowhere to perch, nowhere to shelter.

The sight of it irritated the griffin. She circled nearer to the smallest mountain and opened her beak wide to screech. The noise echoed over the valley, and she followed it up with another. She was calling her own name, as every griffin did, announcing her presence and her strength to the world and to any other griffin that could be in the area.

'Saekrae! Saekrae!'

She listened. No reply came. There were no other griffins here to call back.

Saekrae's stomach twinged again, and she flew lower, remembering her original purpose.

She turned back toward her valley and flew low over it, searching for prey. A fully grown griffin needed a lot of food to survive, and she had to feed her chicks as well.

At this time of day there should be a herd of wild goats down by the stream. She had fed on them before, and one would make a good meal now.

But she found nothing. She circled still lower, searching among the trees, but she saw no sign of prey. Nothing she could catch.

Saekrae began to despair. If she did not eat, within a day or so she would be too weak to fly. And if she died, so would her chicks.

That left only one alternative. With a weary flick of her wings, she circled upward again, flew over the mountain and struck out across the plains.

She had never flown over them before, though she had seen them plenty of times from a distance. The valley had become her territory only recently, when the scarcity of food further into the mountains had forced her to migrate. She had come to the valley pregnant and had laid her eggs a few months later, and she was only now finding out how inadequate her new territory was. Perhaps the plains had something better to offer.

She noticed how different they were fairly quickly. The air was warmer and drier, and smelt of bare earth and grass. The lack of trees disturbed her, but she flew on regardless, alert for any sign of prey.

And, after a time, she found it. There were animals wandering over the plains. Not goats. These were much bigger. Four-legged like goats, and standing together in a herd like them as well. They were grazing, completely oblivious to her presence.

Saekrae did not pause to wonder what they were. She singled out one that was on the edge of the group, hovered above it for a while to pinpoint her target, and then dropped out of the sky like a stone. She hit the animal directly in the back, her talons shattering its spine before they hooked themselves into its flesh, and then she swooped straight up again, carrying it with her. The weight of it dragged her down and she lurched in the air, struggling to keep hold of it. It was heavier than she had expected. She held on grimly to the dying animal and turned back toward the valley.

She made it after an exhausting and unpleasant journey, and shot back over the mountaintop very gratefully. She reached the nest and dumped the now dead animal in the bottom, and then settled down on a branch beside it and folded her wings.

The chicks had hatched by now, all three of them, and were already on their paws and alert. Two of them were grey and brown like herself—one male, one female. The third was black. The fine downy fluff on its front half was grey over black skin, and its hindquarters had jet-black fur. Its big heavy-lidded eyes were silver, and its beak and forelegs were also black. It fell on the prey almost instantly, tearing at it with its beak, and its siblings were quick to join in. Saekrae tore into the animal's flank and began to eat…; there was plenty for all of them. The animal had a lot of meat on it; evidently it had been well fed out on the plains. Its flesh was tender and had a rich flavour, and Saekrae could feel her strength returning with every beakful.

Once she had eaten and the chicks...


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7 of 7 people found the following review helpful
3.0 out of 5 stars A Bit Slow to Start, but an Intriguing Beginning! Nov 21 2010
By S. Gardner - Published on Amazon.com
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I have to confess to having a weakness for anything gryphon-related, their having been my favorite mythological creature since my early years. As such, I was absolutely delighted to see this item become available and didn't hesitate to leap upon it.

The book starts off fairly slow and, really, never does pick up speed. Oh, things happen, but there never seems to be a sense of urgency. You can see fairly early where things are going and how they'll get there, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing. It's a quick read, easily completed in a sitting or three, and what it lacks in suspense it makes up for in charm.

The characters, outside of the black griffin, never really resonated with me, but I found I didn't mind. Stereotypes serve their purposes, and they carried the story well enough. The likable stereotypes are likable, the noble stereotypes are noble, with the range falling comfortably into their places. I didn't connect with them, but I didn't mind reading about them, which is more than I can say for much of what I've read lately. A few of them come and go at strange times - I couldn't remember who Arren's liberator was until I flipped back through the earlier chapters of the book and Rannagon's son pops up in rather suddenly and in contrived moments - but overall, they move as you'd expect.

The story itself is a lot of set-up without a lot of action. Again, things happen, but they're rather obviously precursors to a story that will not be included in this book. Only at the very end does it seem that things actually progress. There were a few places where I rolled my eyes (e.g., Flell's announcement at the end), but it overall again carried itself well, if lightly.

One thing that made me wonder about the author, though, was the name chosen for the black griffin at the end. It bears a rather strong resemblance to the name of the black gryphon in Mercedes Lackey's Mage Wars series (to the point that I twigged to it despite the fact that I last read Lackey's book something like ten years ago). There's probably no avoiding comparisons to other gryphon books, whether they're black or not, but it seems like flat-out pirating of the name regardless of the truth of its origins.

In the end, I really do inexplicably like this book quite a bit. I wouldn't necessarily describe as a 'an edgy new fantasy series' at this point, as the back copy does, but I'd still feel comfortable recommending it to people who don't mind if their fantasy isn't necessarily epic. I'll certainly be looking forward to the next book.
7 of 8 people found the following review helpful
4.0 out of 5 stars Brilliant story avoids cliches and overcomes some clunky writing to make my heart go pitter-patter Jan 3 2011
By Allyn Nichol - Published on Amazon.com
Format:Mass Market Paperback|Amazon Verified Purchase
Although I never spoke with K. J. Taylor before she wrote this book, I've read some of her work and am familiar with several of the people listed in the acknowledgements page, so I was delighted when I heard that Opifex was publishing a fantasy novel. Initially I was worried that it would be the usual trashy fantasy novel, but to my surprise and relief, it was actually pretty good.

The Dark Griffin is hard to summarize without giving away major plot points, but I'll do my best. The novel focuses on Arren Cardockson and Eluna, a griffiner and griffin that live together in the city of Eagleholm where most griffiners and tame griffins live. Eluna loses control of herself and lands Arren in debt, leading them to leave the city to try to capture a vicious wild griffin, the dark griffin of the title. From there, the story takes several unexpected twists and turns, leading to an exciting conclusion that you definitely will not expect.

It's hard to go into greater detail without giving away a lot of the story, so be forewarned that the rest of the review is full of spoilers!

The most important thing in any novel is the writing, of course. Here, the writing is generally good, but unfortunately it suffers from some clumsy sentences and fragments that should have been caught and fixed before publication. Aside from that, while the writing was not the best I've ever read, it was still very good, able to describe the action and keep it moving without getting purple. Any problems I did notice were easily overlooked--for my part, I was so caught up in the story that I only noticed them in passing.

The story itself was interesting and relatively fresh. It subverted a lot of major fantasy cliches, starting with the excellent portrayal of the griffin-griffiner relationship and continuing on to some surprising things that happen to the main characters. Some parts of the story still were a little cliched and easily predicted beforehand, but these moments were few and far between and handled well when they did arrive. It also dealt with dark topics such as racism, slavery, and even violence exceptionally well, treating these mature topics with respect and not trivializing them, while not getting out a soapbox or preaching at the reader.

My one complaint with the actual writing of the story was the characterization of minor characters. While the major ones are well-done and interesting, many of the more minor characters (Gern, Bran, and Flell in particular) are not fleshed out well, and some (Erian) are scarcely even introduced, despite playing an important role in the end. This is a pretty serious problem and the is a large part of why I'm docking a star, but the book's good qualities ultimately outweigh this flaw, at least for me.

I was very impressed by the portrayal of the relationship between griffins and griffiners. Although griffins are undeniably more animalistic than humans, they are no less intelligent--and as certain events show, no less capable of scheming. Both human and griffin points of view are used in the novel to good effect, with each species having a clearly different way of looking at the world and describing things.

Finally, I enjoyed the ambiguity of the book. While the events themselves are straightforward and motives are clear, morality is very ambiguous here. Any assumptions I made about either griffins or humans were subverted multiple times before the end of the book. In particular, the book makes it very clear that wild griffins, griffiners, ordinary humans, and "tame" griffins are all morally ambiguous. Both Arren and Skandar (and, to a lesser extent, Eluna) are presented as people who do wrong things with extremely violent tendencies who get themselves into situations because of their own actions, yet the book never excuses them. It doesn't try to pass off their immoral acts (especially toward the end of the book) as "OK because they're protagonists" any more than it tries to say Rannagon and Shoa's good qualities are just coincidental. The bottom line is that people are just people, and everyone has the capability for good or evil. It's quite well done, and I look forward to seeing how future books in the series approach some of the more questionable actions of Arren and Skandar.
4 of 4 people found the following review helpful
1.0 out of 5 stars Almost offended by the poor quality of this book Feb 22 2012
By A. Delbosc - Published on Amazon.com
Format:Mass Market Paperback
Like other reviewers I have a soft spot for gryphon fantasy, this book was highly publicised at my local bookstore and the opening pages were interesting. But I was quickly disappointed - clunky dialogue, flat characters and incredibly slow pace. The plot seems to happen because the author needs it to - for example a major plot point is relayed to the main character because some guards happen to be talking about it for no good reason. The writing in general feels amateur, like a manuscript that should have stayed in the desk drawer until the writer got the hang of how to craft a plot that drives itself.

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