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A Love Triangle, April 28 2010
This review is from: The Transformation of Bartholomew Fortuno: A Novel (Hardcover)
Reason for Reading: I'm a fan of the time period and as macabre as it sounds, old-time circus "freak" shows. Set in 1865, the year that Lincoln was killed, New York, this story takes place in The American Museum an establishment of Oddities and Curiosities run by one Phineas Taylor Barnum (P.T. Barnum). It was here on the fourth floor that his Curiosities lived: the fat lady, the giantess, the strong man, the conehead, the rubberman and Bartholomew Fortuno, the World's Skinniest Man. Late one night Barthy sees Barnum leading a woman totally covered in wraps into the building. Mystery surrounds this woman, she is to be a new show but Barnum is slow to let out what her "talent" is and the others all gossip and slowly find things out until it is finally revealed. Barnum himself is totally infatuated with this woman, bringing Mrs. Barnum, the senior partner, onto the scene causing problems for everyone. But Bartholomew has also become enamoured of her and become her friend and likewise she has befriended him. This is ultimately a story of love, how deep love can run, and can it survive extreme divisions. I was hooked on this book from the beginning. I have a (what some may call macabre) interest in the old circus side-shows (freak shows, if you will) and this book is set in my favourite time period so there really was no doubt I was going to like it. The story is not based on any actual real historical incident but the background historical details are real. Barnum ran The American Museum for many years before he went into the circus business in his 60s. The story is very compelling and is more about the side-show performers than it is about Barnum. The narrative is told from Bartholomew's point of view; he has a unique sense of his strangeness and is quite proud of it but he becomes challenged as to whether he is truly one of the Curiosities, who is that way by nature as he claims to be, or a Gaff (a fake) who has chosen to be the way he is. This becomes a big theme in the book as does a love triangle that develops, well in reality two love triangles consisting of the same two people with different thirds. The book is certainly well-written, attention grabbing and page-turning. I read the book withing 24 hours. There are two big reveals, obviously the secret of the new performers oddity as I've mentioned and another which isn't revealed until the end of the book. My problem was that I guessed the first as soon as the character was introduced and the second shortly afterwards so my race to the finish was not to find out what the reveal was but simply to see how the characters would react. It was fun getting there and I did enjoy the book but I can't say the ending pleased me much. I would have liked it to have gone a little further with two specific, separate characters before ending. But that's me.
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4.0 out of 5 stars
Historical fiction debut, Aug 23 2010
This review is from: The Transformation of Bartholomew Fortuno: A Novel (Hardcover)
The Transformation of Bartholomew Fortuno is Ellen Bryson's debut novel. Bartholomew Fortuno works for showman P. T. Barnum at his American Museum in New York in 1865. He is billed as the world's thinnest man. He lives and works alongside a host of other 'Curiosities', including a rubber man, a strong man, Marina the fat woman, with whom he shares a close friendship and many more. Bartholomew is content with his life and sharing what he calls 'his gift' with the paying public. To Marina he says; "We teach the world. You know how I feel about this. Nothing in the world comes close to our artistry. To manifest ideals through the body! Your abundance. Alley's strength. My clarity. Why, it's as godlike as one can become." "There is but one thing certain. No matter when we've received our gifts, we've all been blessed. Our uniqueness alone is enough to justify our special place in the world. But even more, our destiny insists we use our gifts the show others who they really are or show them what, in an ideal world , they could become. It may shock them at first, but, deep down, we open their eyes to greater possibilities." Bartholomew's ordered life and the family atmosphere of the Museum (the attractions live there as well) are thrown into disarray by the arrival of a mysterious new Curiosity. Barty catches a glimpse of her, but Barnum seems determined to keep her separated from the others. That little glimpse is enough to enthrall Bartholomew. His interactions with the mysterious Iell challenge his beliefs. "Now here I would disagree. I do not believe we educate our audiences. I believe we frighten them and, in doing so, make them feel better about the dullness of their own lives. We don't open their eyes, Mr. Fortuno, we give them permission to keep them shut...Are we not the nightmare? The gargoyles at the edge of their world?" Bryson has taken a fascinating piece of history and brought it to life. We've all had a glimpse of 'curiosities', both past and present. But Bryson brings a sense of humanity to the inhabitants of the Museum. Rather than being an exhibit, they come to life, infused with feelings, emotions, needs and wants. I liked Bartholomew very much as a character. His prim, proper ways, tempered with his burgeoning desire for more endeared him to me. Fleeting references to his past and his 'gift' heighten our desire to know more and serve to fuel his own enlightenment. Bartholomew's transformation - his journey to step outside the carefully chosen confines he lives in is an emotionally charged story that kept me enthralled from first page to last. Those looking for a fast paced read will not find it here. Rather, the speed of the book matches Bartholomew's emerging edification. An impressive debut. I look forward to reading what Bryson next sets her pen to. Fans of Sara Gruen would enjoy this novel
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3 of 3 people found the following review helpful
2.0 out of 5 stars
Should have loved it ...., Oct 11 2010
By C Wahlman "cdub" - Published on Amazon.com
This review is from: The Transformation of Bartholomew Fortuno: A Novel (Hardcover)
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I should have loved this book: historical fiction about human oddities after the assassination of Abraham Lincoln, pretty compelling idea. The intriguing premise of the novel, however, did not deliver. Barthy was a little too self-righteous to feel any real connection to and his intrigue did not compell me to read. The other characters did not engage me early on. Overall the story started with mystery and promise, but after the first chapter there was very little that kept me reading (other than my own desire to finish and write this review). Strange, this should have been so much better ... not recommended.
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Well-Written But Ultimately A Bit Disappointing, April 24 2011
By A reader from California - Published on Amazon.com
This review is from: The Transformation of Bartholomew Fortuno: A Novel (Hardcover)
Overall, I liked the book, but did not love it. I thought it was very well written, and the characters and historical setting were interesting. However, I had two main issues with the book: Firstly, I found the main character, Bartholomew, not very likeable. He had his moments, but overall was self-indulgent and defensive even when treating other people badly. Secondly, the last two hundred pages were no different than the first one hundred pages. Not much more happened in terms of plot or character development. And the big surprise at the end: come on--anyone could have seen that coming a mile away. Given the potential of the setting and the characters, I would have liked to have seen something more dramatic. But overall, a good debut.
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Freak Show World, Jun 2 2010
By Terri J. Rice "ricepaper" - Published on Amazon.com
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I remembered when I started reading Water for Elephants that the absolute last thing I thought I would want to read about was a circus. Water for Elephants proved me wrong. It was a fantastic book so when The Transformation of Bartholomew Fortuno came along I thought I should give it a go. The characters although freakish were boring. Their thoughts, words and actions were facile. The story began well enough but then just rambled on to its ho hum ending. Having worked his way up in the freak show world from a traveling menagerie to the Barnum Museum, Bartholomew Fortuno feels certain his primary gift is not his freakishness... and his gift will soon be realized. As the thinnest man in the world, nothing good ever came from subjecting himself to the outside world. But those same people who recoiled in fright on the streets were willing to plunk their nickels down to gawk and stare at the circus. Able to eat only six green beans at a meal, he carefully cuts each into thirds and chews each bite twenty-five times. Next to him sits Martina, able to eat and eat and eat. Bartholomew's dearest friend is no other than the fattest woman in the world, Matina, a complex woman whose beginnings were as a second rate act on a riverboat show. "Our uniqueness alone is enough to justify our special place in the world. But even more, our destiny insists we use our gifts to show others who they really are or show them what, in an ideal world, they could become. It may shock them at first, but, deep down, we open their eyes to greater possibilities." Bartholomew's dearest friend, Matina, becomes jealous when the new act, the bearded lady, Iell, joins the show. Bartholomew is overcome, smitten with this woman and everyone wants to know, who she is, what her secret is. I sped through the first hundred pages hours after it arrived in my mailbox. I loved the characters and the bit of mystery and the oddity of the characters, but then past the middle heading toward the last quarter of the book, it began to draaaag. The characters were not developing further, the plot was getting old, the dialogue began to bore me but I simply needed to finish reading it so I could find out in the end what happened to all these people. It did not satisfy.
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