5 of 6 people found the following review helpful
2.0 out of 5 stars
Painfully disappointing, Sep 30 2010
By S. Hansen - Published on Amazon.com
As a guess, I'd say that swapping Travis Taylor with Stephanie Osborne as co-author was not the best choice. It seems common enough that sequels don't measure up to the first in a series, but the drop-off from Human By Choice is rather more abrupt than most. The characters in The Y Factor are one-dimensional and the plot has gaps that are disconcerting.
From the beginning, the reader is asked to believe that "Miss" Trung is a 29 year old senior scientist with two PhDs and a history that includes a stint in the US Army. Her life prior to the opening chapter is never explained in any detail but fitting in an undergraduate degree, two PhDs, one in molecular microbiology, a couple of years in the Army, and enough research work to be heading up a research group and a priority acquisition by a super secret government agency into 29 years is stretching the limits of believability. Unfortunately, that's just the first of many unbelievable or at least unsupported story elements.
Another jarring note is the authors' heavy handed anti-Islamic bias, although the treatment of the Hindu religion isn't much better. Again, this ties in the rather black and white, good or bad, treatment of the various characters.
Oh, and if by some chance you're looking for romantic or possibly erotic fiction, the rating would be ZZZZZ. Five Zs for a real sleeper.
I gave it two stars instead of one only because I actually was able to finish it. But it was a close thing. Avoid this one.
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars
Great book!, April 15 2011
By Daniel Hollifield - Published on Amazon.com
Just finished this a little while ago and I thought it was a wonderful read! The characters are realistic, I know people in real life like the human characters in here. The alien characters are well written to accent their alien-ness. The story is excellent. Just an all around entertaining book. I would recommend it to every SF fan.
2 of 3 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars
Another good "Understand the alien mind" book, Oct 2 2010
By Noah Nason - Published on Amazon.com
This review is from: The y Factor (Paperback)
I enjoyed this second book of hopefully a longer series. I especially enjoyed it coming from the point of a female mind, which is still not found often in the SF arena. I would like to see the third book take on this alien culture from the alien male point of view.