1.0 out of 5 stars
Historically Incorrect to an Absurdity. Makes one of the greatest pharaohs look shallow and pathetic., Jun 9 2011
This review is from: Thebes at War (Paperback)
Historically Incorrect to an Absurdity. Makes one of the greatest pharaohs look shallow and pathetic. While writing about a war, the greatest battles of antiquity were completely skipped! I wonder how an Egyptian author could write something like this. (Especially a Noble Prize winner!)
The author made pharaoh Ahmose to be a witless politician, bad husband, and a shallow patriot of his country.
For example, Ahmose's lands were conquered, his family forced in exile. 10 years later he returns with a large army to re-conquer what he thinks is rightfully his. He takes possession of Egypt with fire and sward, only to allow his enemy's royal family peacefully depart outside of Egypt's borders escorted by half of their army with all of their military equipment. After that he proclaims the war is over and calmly returns home. This would truly prove him a dull politician that does not deserve any respect.
Another nonsense: Pharaoh Ahmose is supposed to be a true patriot of Egyptian country and its people who cherishes deep hatred for barbaric hyksos that conquered his land and enslaved his people. However he gives all his affection and all his thoughts to a barbaric hyksos princess while having no bond, affection or any kind of relationship at all with his own wife, young and beautiful Nefertary, royal blood native Egyptian princess.
He orders his soldiers to slaughter innocent Egyptian women and children (including a noble lady, the mother of his best friend and best commander) that are used by hyksos as alive shields. However, when that very day Egyptians captured a hyksos woman he publicly ordered to spare her and even give her all kind of comforts... simply because he secretly desires the hyksos beauty. A man who cannot sacrifice his own lust in such a moment would never deserve any respect in the eyes of his subjects.
Such outstanding historical figures as Queen Warrior Ahotep and powerful Ahmose-Nefertary are barely mentioned in the book. The author skipped their achievements and significance completely. This is also true about the greatest battles of the antiquity: The famous battle of Avaris and the siege-battle of Sharuhem. Skipping the most important figures and events does not make a good historical book. In fact it is very disappointing.
The ending of the book is really dumb. There is no joy or pride or any excitement after the liberation of Egypt was achieved.
The first part of the book is so dry and boring that I completely understand why some readers gave up and did not finish the book. None of the characters were developed until much later in the book. None made you feel touched or affected in any way.
As for historical errors they are numerous! The author did not bother to do any research at all. I will mention just a few:
-Thebes were never conquered by hyksos
-Royal family could NOT flee to Nubia because Nubia is an eternal enemy of Egypt that especially aggressively attacked them at that time.
-"iron helmets" did not exist at that time. Iron was unknown to Egyptians for at least the few centuries afterwards.
-the pharaoh of Egypt in 1550 A.D. could not ask about the fate of the city named Ptolemais. Ptolemy was a Greek general who came to Egypt in 305 B.C. which is about 1800 years after the events we discuss.
And so on and so forth...
Honestly for a Noble Prize winner and also an Egyptian who claims to write "with love for Egypt and his people" this book is a disgrace.
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