3.0 out of 5 stars
Not quite perfect, April 22 2004
This review is from: When It's Perfect (Mass Market Paperback)
Part of the book's problem was its unevenness. Sometimes it really held my interest and other times I just wanted to be finished with it. I like Marcus a lot (a lot, alot), but Mary doesn't impress me much. In fact, I found her annoying. Somehow, though, I cannot see this woman who so loved the sea and wilds of Cornwall, hating to leave that behind, happy to follow Marcus to the dry deserts of Egypt.
The letters from the sister that opened each chapter were a very nice touch, adding to the reader's understadning, providing foreshadowing, and making the sister an active character in the story. The who-done-it is also well executed, as are the love scenes.
All in all, it's okay and has its good moments, but it's not great -- and definitely not perfect.
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5.0 out of 5 stars
Almost Perfect., Feb 11 2004
This review is from: When It's Perfect (Mass Market Paperback)
Such a simple storyline, written with effortless skill, and the love scenes are drawn with touching finesse. I have read countless romance novels and this author's ability to shape a love scene measure up with the best. The description of her lingering romantic moments is seductive, sensual, and so beautiful. **Sigh**
This book is the sequel to Ashworth's "Someone Irresistible". The setting is Cornwall, England in the year 1855. The story begins with the tragic ending of a much-loved sister. Marcus Longfellow, the Earl of Renn, has come home seeking answers. He implores Miss Mary Marsh, his sister's friend, to aid him.
The beginning of the book is slow paced, and this leisure tempo enables the reader to understand the characters fully. Mary Marsh, 29, is a spinster by choice. She is wellborn, but not of the noble class. Mary makes her way in the world by designing lacy erotic ladies' undergarments. Thus, the path Ashworth draws upon to set up some of the romance.
Marcus Longfellow is gentle, poised, confident, and poetic. The morning following their first warm liaison, the Earl of Renn whispers softly:
--- "I learned something last night, Mary. I learned that in all of my thirty-four years, I've never once been given paradise. Oh, I thought I'd had paradise before, several times in fact, but I learned last night that I was wrong. Very, very wrong. Nothing in my experience has been like the paradise you gave me, Mary." **Sigh. Are there men in the world like this?** ---
The stimulating subplot surrounding the sister's death is intriguing. The mysterious secrets circling the family are compelling, and throughout the pages, Ashworth continues to tease the reader with carefully timed connections.
This Adele Ashworth's work is close to perfection; however, I was troubled with one element. It bothered me that Mary embarked on a career designing erotic lingerie. Why? Upon suffering the forceful loss of innocence, would any woman then move forward and design lingerie meant to arouse wild sexual passion in a husband or lover? Nevertheless, this is a good book. A solid read all the way.
Grace Atkinson, Ontario - Canada.
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