3.0 out of 5 stars
in the sandbox with Wittgenstein, April 1 2004
This review is from: White Apples (Paperback)
Full disclosure: this review belongs in the I-love-Jonathan-Carroll-but category.
Obviously anyone who adores Carroll's unique brand of metaphysical surrealism will want to read WHITE APPLES. The problem with the book isn't so much that Carroll has created unsympathetic characters this time around (though the adoption of third-person narration does distance them from the reader), nor that Carroll's beliefs about the afterlife are becoming drearily New Age (though they may well be). The problem is that Carroll's writing is not consistently up to his best.
Carroll's work has always been defined as much by its metaphysics as by its surrealism, but in his very best novels--THE LAND OF LAUGHS, THE WOODEN SEA--the metaphysics is folded expertly into the plot. Large swaths of WHITE APPLES are given over to metaphysical exchanges. During these intervals not only does interest in the plot lag, but interest in the characters does too: very little, at least in the course of these metaphysical exchanges, distinguishes WHITE APPLES's protagonists from dozens of previous Carroll creations. In the book's most relentlessly metaphysical passages, Vincent, Isabelle, Coco, Bruno, and the enigmatic Tillman Reeves are merely cardboard cut-outs. This, combined with the aforementioned third-person narration, is not good.
The other problem with WHITE APPLES is that many of the more surprising and/or surrealist moments lack the shockingly strange verve of Carroll's best work. Coco Hallis's odd dietary predilections aren't anything we haven't already seen in, for example, the TERMINATOR movies, while Isabelle's exchanges with her grandmother feel like outtakes from other, better Carroll novels. Carroll's views about the afterlife get a few new twists here, but by and large he's rehashing older material (though not as egregiously as he did in his recent contribution to CONJUNCTIONS magazine's New Fabulism issue).
Only in two splendid scenes--a confrontation with the forces of Chaos at the local zoo, and Bruno Mann's journey to consult with the enigmatic but powerful King of the Park--does the writing in WHITE APPLES approach Carroll's best. I'm almost willing to recommend the book based on these two scenes alone. But readers looking for a more consistently engaging entry into Carroll's worlds should stick with THE LAND OF LAUGHS or THE WOODEN SEA.
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2.0 out of 5 stars
Annoying, Jan 9 2004
This review is from: White Apples (Paperback)
Vincent Ettrich, the suave ladies man, goes on a date one night only to learn that he has died and come back, but can't remember anything about it. His task in a nutshell: remember everything and pass the knowledge of the afterlife to his unborn son. Each chapter of White Apples contains a surprise. Carroll won't let a dozen pages slip past without throwing out a shocker. In the beginning, I was intrigued; as the book wore on, it became grating. I wanted to like this book, but it was just too annoying. The characters were interesting, but unlikable. The bad guys were undefined and incomprehensible, and the same could be said for some of the good guys. New "rules" were constantly popping into existence to justify or limit sudden miracles or newfound powers. The characters did a lot of explaining to each other, because nothing made sense. Through it all, the reader suffers. By the end, I gained the strong impression that Carroll was making it all up as he went along, without ever having a clear idea of where he was going. That's great as a creative exercise, but not as something to sell to others in the guise of a novel. Avoid.
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3.0 out of 5 stars
great mainstream novel, Oct 30 2003
This review is from: White Apples (Paperback)
I agree with a previous review that this is an excellent book but not at all as surreal as I would have liked. But for a mainstream author, Carroll is one of the best. Very imaginative, yet still appeals to the masses. But if you are thinking about buying this book because somebody told you it was extremely surreal and subversive you might want to check out the anti-mainstream surreal author Carlton Mellick III.
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