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3.0 out of 5 stars
A good mystery, but....., Jun 2 2004
Hawk Moon is a well constructed murder mystery set in a rural Iowa community. Two Native American women, Sandra Moore and her sister Karen, have been killed in a very grisly fashion. Robert Payne is a private eye and former FBI profiler who is asked to consult on the case by Cindy Rhodes, a local policewoman. As it happens, Cindy's husband, David, is the main suspect.
A similar crime had occurred in the same locale nearly a hundred years before and the author, Ed Gorman, cleverly juxtaposes the current investigation with the one that took place way back then. A remarkable juggling act to be sure.
Some interesting twists are revealed as the plot unfolds and Payne ultimately brings the guilty party to justice in a dramatic showdown at the book's conclusion.
That's the good part. Now for the bad.
Quite frankly, I find Gorman's writing style, at times, irritating. Despite the grisliness of the subject matter, he tends to frequently lapse into a type of maudlin prose that has a smarmy earnestness about it. Most of this out of place sentimentality gains expression through the musings of the lead character, Robert Payne. This causes Payne's personality to come through in an unflattering manner, as that of an idealistic Pollyanna.
Hawk Moon is an engaging, interesting tale, marred by stylistic choices that detract from its effectiveness.
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5.0 out of 5 stars
MOON FOR THE MISBEGOTTEN, Oct 17 2001
I have to hand it to Ed Gorman. This second entry in his Robert Payne "Moon" series clearly demonstrates just how nice a guy this Payne really is. Although sometimes you might think he comes across as being too good, or too nice, you can't help but like and yes, admire, this man. He has a strong sense of friendship and love; his reminiscences of his deceased wife are some of the most touching in modern crime fiction. You know Payne really loved this woman. And his relationships with different characters in both books further proves that Payne is probably the nicest "detective" out there.
As for the plot of this one, it's a little complex and sometimes incoherent, but it moves well, and once again, his parallel story telling ties the two segments together nicely. Particularly unique is his handling of Anna Tolan, a police investigator back in 1903, who in addition to trying to solve a similar case to Payne's in the nineties, is having doubts about her relationship with Trace Wydmore, a nice young man who is trying to score a "home run" with the virginal young girl. Considering the times, one can understand both Anna and Trace's different problems. Their dialogue rings so true, it's refreshing.
The murders that Payne has to solve lead him to a belligerent Native American named David Rhodes, whose estranged wife, just happens to be policewoman Cindy Rhodes. I'll say one thing for Iowa---they certainly advanced women's lib in their use of women as police officers.
The supporting characters are appropriately shady and/or nice, and Payne's adventures with the two elderly Native Americans who want to fly in his biplane is extraordinary.
A great novel in spite of its minor flaws.
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5.0 out of 5 stars
Moves like a hawk!, May 21 2001
What can I say? Another smoothie from the Master. Don't read this with the lights out -- in fact it'll be impossible to read this in the dark.I hope Ed continues to write more funny stuff though, like Daugher of Darkness. Can we get more satirically hilarious old Hollywood kiss-and-tell quiche please? Love those faded actors. Maybe Gorman can do something about Bradbury versus Mr. Barrymore. He should work closely with Matheson, Jr. or David Schow and get back on the old saddle with hilarious faded cowboy actors and so on. Maybe he can freshen the read with faded scifi actors too (ala Galaxy Quest). Hey Ed, time to imagine a really satirical SF novel, with Hollywood in it. Whaddaya say, hey?
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