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1.0 out of 5 stars
Weak Prose, May 23 2000
As a child, Judith discovers a Roman coin, and from there on catches the fever for archaeology. A peasant, apparently, she is suffered to play and learn with the children of the local aristocracy, of whom the fascinating Tybalt is a part. Tybalt eventually leaves for University, but when he returns, Judith is a young woman, and she falls -- or so the author would have us believe -- in love with Tybalt. For some indiscernable reason, Tybalt apparently loves Judith back, and they marry.Soon after, Judith and Tybalt traipse off to Egypt for an excavation (Tybalt is an archaeologist, much to Judith's delight, since she's ten times as interested in the subject as Tybalt is, though she could never join in with him because, naturally, she's a woman. What a logical reason! Edwardians; what can one say?) which soon appears to be cursed -- for Judith, any way. This novel was exceptionally tedious. One knows before one even opens the book that there will prove to be no curse, only the paranoia of humans and a string of "bad luck." Not that many people would accept the possibility of a real curse in today's society; but at least if the author had TRIED to convince us, that would have been interesting. Knowing before-hand that there's nothing to be tense about does tend to dissipate the dramatic tension, though. Even if I wasn't suprised at the conclusion of the novel, I was suprised at the shallow-ness of the relationship between Judith and Tybalt, and at Judith's emotional idiocy. If these two had been a couple in real life, they could poster for the top ten reasons why people shouldn't marry. The story is told in a first-person narrative, so it's impossible to get Tybalt's view of things; but judging by his behavior, I would say that the man doesn't love Judith, let alone care about her. As for Judith, she doesn't want to stick around Smallsville as a spinster handing out care packages for the village rectory her entire life, understandably, and Tybalt's the most attractive escape route. The parts of the novel that should have been symbols of the cementing of their relationship are hideous failures -- the wedding is so depressing it inspires one to philosophize on the futility of continued living, and the denoumet where Judith almost dies and Tybalt calmly sets aside her rather legitimate fears about their relationship as if she's a bubble-headed leash-dog made me want to puke, then scratch the bastard's eyes out, in that order. The scenes that truly show what their relationship is like are the ones where Judith hasn't seen Tybalt for days, and when she does see him (finally), he barely looks at her and then runs off with another woman. Duh, girlfriend! This novel fails on two major points: it's not suspenseful, and it's not romantic. Key elements for a work of romantic suspense. This was not the first Victoria Holt novel I read, but it will be the last. Better to save my money, not to mention my sanity (or what's left of it), than to read another of her books if there's a chance it might be like this one. Uhg.
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