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1.0 out of 5 stars
Very Disappointing, Jun 20 2004
By A Customer
I'm a HUGE fan of the Lucy Stone series, but this book was just very disappointing (I gave it one star, but only because I love the series, not this book though). If you have not read this series, do not start with this book. This is not representative of the storylines in the series. I understand coming up with fresh ideas must be a challenge, but this book had so many flaws and gaps, I found it hard to read. But most of all, it doesn't play fair for the reader.First of all, the victim doesn't appear until halfway through the book. I kept reading and reading and hoping and reading, but it didn't happen. I also found the book to be very disjointed, although there were a fair amount of red herrings, nothing seemed to flow in this book. However the biggest surprise was when Lucy stumbled onto the killer at the end of the book (yes, she stumbled, because she had no clue who the killer was) and this person had NEVER been in the book until this person "confessed" to the killing. Twice, the killer had been briefly talked about (amazingly, this was only a couple of chapters prior to the confession), and not once had this person been in the storyline. When this person "confessed" there was no way the reader could have known any of what the confession was about, because the reader was not given any clues nor a chance to even learn about this person (there were a couple of little clues when this person was briefly talked about a couple of chapters before confessing...but in no way, shape or form, could the reader put together why this person killed Pru). Also, the killer has the same first name as a victim in a past book in this series. And in the last chapter, the killer is referred to by the victim of the past book, first and LAST name!! (I don't want to say which one just in the off chance someone wants to read this book). This happens when the police are talking to Lucy about the killers confession. When I read the name, I went...huh? How can that be? I pulled out the book I thought the character was in originally, and there it was. It was a mistake, but someone somewhere should have caught it. I also would think the killer should have had a different first name (it's a bit unusual), as it's been used before earlier in the series. As I said before, I am a huge fan of this series (and I hate writing this), but I will purchase the next book. However with this book, I felt like I wasted my money. Very rarely do I feel this way, but somewhere prior to publication, someone should have noticed all these things. There's just no excuse. I even read this book twice, thinking my mind was playing games. I still didn't get it even the second time around. On a positive note, I found the prologue and epilogue to be really a clever idea. I also liked the fact that the kids weren't quite as smart-mouthed (although they have their moments in this book). Bill also seemed to lighten-up in this book. This book centered around Kudo, the dog, but there was no mention of the three kittens Lucy gave the children for Christmas in an earlier book. I'm not certain if they are still around, but if they are, I think it would have been nice to at least mention the cats since we heard all about every inch of their daily family lives.
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