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1.0 out of 5 stars
Read only if you have Aspirin, April 5 2004
First off, let me start by saying that I am a fantasy story/ sci fi fan. The ideas and plot in this story I found okay but a tad formulaic. But the thing that really bothers me is the way John Norman writes. Good Gods, it's horrible! The paragraphs are broken, choppy lacking any sense of proper gramatical structure and is MASSIVELY repetitive. To say that he repeats words cannot fully explain his "style". He has an annoying habit of writing things like....I, too, understood this.....they, too, saw this.......we, too, fought..... And descriptions? Boring, drab and again, repetitive. This man would benefit greatly from the use of a thesaurus! He takes 2 pages to say what could be said descriptively and thoroughly in a paragraph.Another annoying habit that he has used on some occassions is creating words. Louis Carrol did this, as did some other authors too, but they had and have a command of the English language. Norman shouldn't be allowed to make up words from joining two or more every day words together. He is teetering on not being allowed to write at all...not even his name. It saddens me to learn that John Norman is a college professor. It's no wonder that he teaches philosophy. Half the time you have to ponder hard trying to figure out how he is describing things such as big rocks. I have read several of Norman's books. Each time I got a massive headache from reading it and had to quit or have my girlfriend translate the story from Norman-ese to English. Even then, we are wondering if that has anything to do with my girlfriend's sudden resurgence of migraines. In short, Norman's stories are okay, by no means great, but his writing should make us all sorrowfull knowing that these were supposedly written by an educated man. After reading how he writes his work, I wonder where the publisher's editors were. If anyone handed in a story like this to an English teacher or creative writing teacher, they would surely return it with an F emblazoned on the front. Gor is a book series that people should read if there are no other books in existance and they really are in DESPERATE need bathroom material.
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