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Rough Draft [Abridged] [Audiobook] (Audio Cassette)

by James W. Hall (Author), Sandra Burr (Reader)
3.9 out of 5 stars  See all reviews (11 customer reviews)

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James Hall's series about beach bum Thorne (Mean High Tide, Buzz Cut, Hard Aground) placed him firmly in a Holy Trinity of Floridian crime novelists. Like Elmore Leonard and Carl Hiaasen, Hall brought to life Florida's alluring, addictive mix of sand and ocean, hibiscus and alligator, tanned skin and pastel stucco. Rough Draft, however, is less concerned with place than with plot: Miami is a cipher, a generic background for the convoluted whodunit (or perhaps more precisely, who's doing it to whom) Hall weaves around former policewoman and successful crime writer Hannah Keller.

Fiercely protective of her brilliant but haunted 11-year-old son, who five years ago witnessed the murders of his grandparents (presumably by the embezzler his grandfather was pursuing), Hannah becomes an unwitting pawn in an FBI operation to catch Hal Bonner. Bonner is a Cali assassin with a particularly brutal "signature." Since J.J. Fielding escaped with $463 million in drug money, Hal is hot on his trail; if--the FBI assumes--he can be persuaded that Hannah has found Fielding and the cash, he'll emerge from hiding to exact revenge. They lay a series of clues for Hannah to follow, beginning with a gruesomely annotated copy of her first book that seems to be a direct message from her parents' killer. But as the 72 hours allotted to the plan unfold, it becomes increasingly clear that Hannah will not be led by breadcrumbs; she prefers making her own path.

For sheer presence and emotional depth, Hannah may not be on a par with Alexandra Rafferty, the Miami police photographer of Body Language, and the machinations of the FBI agents--mostly an unpleasant bunch who are wound tighter than the proverbial top--may seem so labyrinthine as to verge on the ridiculous. But Hall serves up a delicious pair of villains in Hal and Misty (who is stalking Hannah for her own purposes). The slow-thinking killer and the quick-talking Hooters girl are chillingly vicious and oddly funny; picture a Capra-esque screwball courtship conducted at the Bates Motel. --Kelly Flynn --This text refers to an out of print or unavailable edition of this title.



From Publishers Weekly

Veteran thriller master Hall (Body Language) exhibits a new dimension in this latest suspense novel. His intrepid protagonist Thorne conspicuously absent, he again features a female protagonist. Five years ago, beleaguered Miami police detective and single mom Hannah Keller was closing in on J.J. Fielding, a banker/money launderer for the Cali drug cartel. But when agents got close to nabbing Fielding, he disappeared with $463 million in embezzled cash. Meanwhile, Keller and her loving parents were about to celebrate her big break; she'd just sold her first mystery novel for a sizable sum. Her happiness turned to horror when she discovered her mother and her father, a former U.S. Attorney, dead--assassinated gang-style by killers leaving Fielding's "calling card" and a sole witness, Keller's then six-year-old son, Randall. The case has remained unsolved since. Now, Miami FBI agents Frank Sheffield and Helen Shane are out to capture the man who murdered a U.S. senator's daughter. They're sure that the killer is Hal Bonner, hired gun for the Cali cartel, and they decide to use Keller and her son as decoys to capture Bonner. Meanwhile, looking for revenge is Fielding's disturbed daughter, Hooters' employee, Misty. Filled with rage at her father's disappearance, she's determined to kill young Randall. In a creepy plot twist, Keller finds a copy of her first novel marked with scribblings that contain a code, possibly from Fielding himself. Solid suspense builds as the FBI, Misty and Hal chase Keller in choppers, cars and UPS vans. An expert creator of grotesque villains and fast action, former poet Hall raises the crossbar with his sensitive insights into the human condition. (Jan.)
Copyright 1999 Reed Business Information, Inc. --This text refers to an out of print or unavailable edition of this title.

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4.0 out of 5 stars Extremely Good Read!, Jun 15 2004
This review is from: ROUGH DRAFT (Hardcover)
James Hall is a fantastic writer! I read other suspense novels and few of them engage me as much as James Hall. In Rough Draft James Hall creates a villain named Hal who is a wonderful character study - complex, evil and with a little bit of humanity. What more could you want in a antagonist? The heroine in Rough Draft has a son with mental issues. Reading the first part of the book, it seems like the kid shouldn't have as severe mental problems as he does. He witnessed his grandparents death, but his mental problems seem over-the-top for what he witnessed. However, this is why James Hall is so good. By the end of the book you suddenly understand why the boy is the way he is. One other thing about this book: it is actually two mysteries in one -- worth reading!
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5.0 out of 5 stars Brilliant in the mind of those who can read!!, Jan 30 2004
By J.C. (Virgin, Utah USA) - See all my reviews
This review will be short but straight to the point. The book was brilliant! I loved it. A must read for anyone who loves to read! James Hall is a mastermind with his fictional tales, which make you feel as if you're in them as well. Hall brings each scene together with a gripping chill and leaves the reader begging for more! This was an amazing book and I say to James Hall - Keep Them Coming!!
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2.0 out of 5 stars Play Misty in Margaritaville, Mar 2 2003
By "curtcow" (Short Hills, NJ USA) - See all my reviews
This review is from: Rough Draft (Audio Cassette)
To suggest that Hall's 'Rough Draft' is in a class with Elmore Leonard and Carl Hiaasen is like comparing Mickey Mouse to Ernest Hemingway. None of the characters seem real, and a few would be better suited to a science fiction story. Hal the antisocial homicidal maniac with almost supernatural powers to blend in and kill with his bare hands and Stevie the 11-year-old genius who can manipulate the FBI's computer system have no roots in reality.

To please an egomaniacal senator whose daughter Hal killed, super ambitious FBI agent Helen Shane sets up an elaborate scam to trap Hal using heroine Hannah Keller as bait. The detestable Shane misses obvious opportunities to nail Hal while Hannah unrealistically gets sucked into the plan endangering her fragile son Randall along the way. Agent Frank Sheffield, torn between Shane's directives and his feelings for Hannah, has enough backbone to challenge Helen and the senator but will straight out lie to Hannah when she starts to figure things out.

On top of an incredulous plot, Hall also builds in awkward gimmicks like the fact that Hannah's name and Frank's kayak are palindromes, which ties to the coded messages that Hannah's been getting. When the character named Misty hijacked the boat named Margaritaville, it seemed an apt metaphor for the lack of symmetry to this story.

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3.0 out of 5 stars Murder In Miami
When Miami police officer Hannah Keller arrives at her parents' house to pick up her 11-year-old son, she finds both parents murdered and her son deeply traumatised. Read more
Published on Aug 1 2001 by Untouchable

5.0 out of 5 stars Couldn't Put It Down!!!!
This review will be short!!!! Hall kept me enthralled from Page 1 to Finish. I couldn't put the book down and stayed up all night to read it!
Published on May 4 2001 by G. Jones

3.0 out of 5 stars Good story, but cliched characters and conclusion drag
This was my first Hall book and I was definitely impressed with his storytelling and the use of action throughout the book. Read more
Published on May 4 2001

5.0 out of 5 stars Miami Sizzzler
The Grove, Stiltsville, the Orange Bowl...murder, mayhem, and white collar crime, no one depicts this town better than James W. Hall. Read more
Published on Jan 30 2001 by G. Ware Cornell Jr.

4.0 out of 5 stars Smooth and sleek
Another addition to Hall's well written Florida thrillers. Things are not as they usually are. The FBI aren't heroes. The Travis McGee hunk is a slacker. Read more
Published on Jan 20 2001 by John Bowes

4.0 out of 5 stars Retelling of Bones of Coral?
James Hall is a terrific writer in every respect. Not only are his characterizations vivid and his plots intriguing, but his use of language often creates a tone or mood that is... Read more
Published on Jan 4 2001 by Dr. Christopher Coleman

5.0 out of 5 stars Love all of his Books
James Hall does an excellent job! His books are an interesting read and keep you turning the pages. His main Character Thorn is very well done.
Published on Dec 29 2000 by cyberkristie

3.0 out of 5 stars A good, but not great story
I enjoyed this book, and I'll agree with some of the other reviewers who said that the plot was solid. Read more
Published on Dec 10 2000 by LadyT

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