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So much promise, but ultimately unsatisfying
on April 20, 2010
I was initially drawn into this novel - in the beginning, the characters were developed as quirky, compelling people and I was very interested to see what would happen to them, and what their connections all meant. However, it felt as though the author, at the end, either lost interest or could not decide himself what should happen or what it all meant, or perhaps he felt that the "loose ends" could simply be left and still provide meaning to a reader. Unfortunately, they do not. As a reader, the "loose ends" provided neither meaning or "nuance" but only disappointing flatness and disengagement.
What we are left with in the end is just meaninglessness [SPOILERS BELOW]- all of the characters are left in unclear, unresolved situations less interesting than the ones they started in, there are significant gaps and unanswered questions, and absolutely no ties between the characters are explained or drawn out. The novel does not end on a note that creates wonder or imagination - it ends almost on a note of boredom. For example, why create such an interesting, complex character in Joyce and then fail to tell us anything about her motivations for her actions in the last half of the book, what she's done, and why she is going where she is? She starts out as a beautiful, complex young person but ends up being treated as a flat blank. Also, why would Joyce not report the body she found? If she did not, it's incredibly disturbing and bizarre, and distracts from everything we know or could wonder about her. Similarly, Noah starts out as a complex, confused but engaged character and ends up being portrayed oddly dispassionate. What happened to Arizna, her business and why does she demonstrate no love or affection for her son or son's father? And, the Nikolski compass just falls down a vent - and that's it?
It honestly just felt like I had wasted my time caring or bothering with the story.