Just Say What's On Your Mind Paperback – Sep 25 2008
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That said when it gets hot it gets graphic - separating itself from romance novels which can bring you to the edge, then leave you looking for a way/person to finish the job.
This book does not leave you wanting more...it takes you all the way.
Overall a good story, I found Mike's (the husband) personal background for exploring/watching his wife "play" to be interesting. In some ways I'm sure all men can relate to his "past" from some angle even if it doesn't apply directly.
Bennett plays the third wheel or "extra male" and plays his role very well and I actually enjoyed his involvement in the story as he never takes anything away or becomes overpowered in the story.
There's a BDSM club involved at one point too, which I felt wasn't very original (in any form) and really could have lived without, but - BUT it does lead off to a racy twist written in a way that got my heart thumping outside of the club.
Ironically this scene eventually disappointed me too, simply for the fact that its VERY underwritten. The details are sparse, the exposition lacking and I simply wanted more from it - which is surprisingly frustrating considering how the rest of the book is very detailed and in your head.
In this sense that scene felt almost tacked on and ironically, if truly explored might have added a good chunk content (and pages) to the book if one considered the implications of what could have happened - if the twist didn't end the way it does oh so very quickly.
Overall a good read and well worth your money if your looking for a nice mfm wife watching themed book, this will keep you reading to the last page.
Its too bad that last page feels like the end of a journal entry rather then an ending, hopefully we might see a sequel of a sorts?
Most of what's available ranges from pretty bad to wholesale crap.
So it's a real shocker to run across a story with an actual STORY, character development, complex relationships, and educated English grammar and spelling!
This story is longer than most available in this genre from Amazon (or pretty much anywhere, I guess), but it is a good read throughout. Sexy and somehow realistic. What does a couple ACTUALLY say to one another when they are experimenting at the edges of propriety and convention? Not the hackneyed stereotypical things that most writers throw in to keep the sex scenes from banging together (so to speak!), but real talking and caring dialog.
What an idea!
Porn? Yes, I suppose, but much more solid prose and more mainstream than a lot of what's available.
And yet, really HOT.
If you are curious by this kind of lifestyle, as I am, I would definitely recommend this book.