Good grief...as an author if you're terrible at grammar, then hire a decent proofreader! First of all, "lets and let's" do not mean the same thing. Let's is a contraction of 'let us' and 'lets' means to allow.
"Everyone goes to Docs Miller's for everything." What the hell?
Docs Miller's, seems to imply more than one Doctor Miller and since "Miller's" means belonging to Miller, it should have something that belongs to Miller, and yet it didnt. The next sentence gives the information that there are two doctors with the surname Miller, so I guess it should have been without the apostrophe, but the whole sentence should be reworked. That was just one instance of how I had to keep going back to figure out just what the author was trying to say - easier to simply give up.
Where did I miss that this story was an historical romance? "...I'll say it was a coming together of two bodies in the age-old dance of time..." Yikes, so bad! You may find it hard to imagine but I find that phraseology excessively corny.
So many things were just awkward and yanked me out of the story, so that after I wrote this review I started on a different book.
- Format: Kindle Edition
- File Size: 2992 KB
- Print Length: 268 pages
- Simultaneous Device Usage: Unlimited
- Publisher: Laramie Briscoe Books (March 9 2017)
- Sold by: Amazon.com Services LLC
- Language: English
- ASIN: B01N1QO787
- Text-to-Speech: Enabled
- Word Wise: Enabled
- Customer Reviews: 255 customer ratings
- Amazon Bestsellers Rank: #1,109 Free in Kindle Store (See Top 100 Free in Kindle Store)
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